uNtouched:
I might be wrong but I think your issue is that you are not putting a file system on the second partition. After mkfs.vfat for the first partition, do a mkfs.ext3 for the second partition.

musicoman:
/dev/mmcblk0p2 on /Root type ext3 (rw,noatime) means the second partition on your mmc card is mounted on /Root. I would take that to mean it is working
David