maemo.org - Talk - View Single Post - Attn Marketing Gurus: Need help writing a press release

sjgadsby	2009-09-11 , 15:13
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...as well as the online Linux and Open Source communities as well.

Drop one "as well".

Isiac Asimov

Isaac

E. E. Doc. Smith

"Doc" is a nickname, so: E. E. "Doc" Smith.

...is available for sale online at www.Amazon.com, and through select wholesale and retail channels.

Axe the comma.

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