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	mrojas	2009-09-13 , 02:26
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Originally Posted by Lord Raiden

lol. It's funny you bumped this thread, because I was about to reply in here. Anywho...

http://www.prlog.org/10281863-south-...ok-author.html

Ok, I found this while doing some more link diving, and I think it's got what I needed to see to understand this. And oddly enough, being sleep deprived I actually understand this now. Go figure. It must be that I was just overthinking the whole thing. lol. Anywho, here's my first attempt at a press release. Tell me what you think.

Any comments?

Can I give you a hand? I would change the part about the novels to this:

"...his first novel, entitled "The Oort Perimeter." It is the first in series known as the "Bitter Cycles of Man."

The novel tells the story of Earthfleet, the military arm of the Society, tasked with Earth's protection. Earthfleet continous struggle for Earth's safety turns into a deadly race against the clock when a mysterious new force alters the delicate power balance of the Galaxy. Now, Earthfleet and their allies must find the truth behind this dark force... before Earth and the nine races are destroyed.

This novel is the first book of a total of 15 novels in this series which is broken down into three sagas: Earthfleet, Lost Fleet, and Lost Races..."

Edit: I could very well change the last sentence of the paragraph (after "Galaxy" and before "This novel is the first book " for:

"Will Earthfleet and their allies find the truth behind this dark force before Earth and the nine races are destroyed?"

Hope it helps!

Last edited by mrojas; 2009-09-13 at 02:31.

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